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Too far gone... Won't come back... The light's not on... His head will crack...
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Aug 20, 2025
Aug 20, 2025 at 3:23 PM UTC
Unamed (tentative title was "Too Far Gone")
Too far gone... Won't come back... The light's not on... His head will crack...
This isn't a new "rhyme" I just found it in one of the spiral bound notebooks that I used to write in long ago. The time notation next to the entry (which isn't great, but sounded good to my ear) says Wednesday, March 21st, 2007 6:17pm PST. Oddly specific, but I guess that's me sometimes. 😄 Clearly I was not feeling too well, and...yeah....but it is what it is. Much love folks! ❤️
casey-thomas-mcclain
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Aug 20, 2025
Aug 20, 2025 at 3:23 PM UTC
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