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No, I say it's not unconscious, For your Shadow's silhouette in me, Whose force and face I can't always see... I don't know, for it's subconscious. Will you say I can have my way? Or will you haunt me in our Laughter? Laughter without a face is a cry
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Nov 13, 2013
Nov 13, 2013 at 9:58 PM UTC
It's subconscious, not uncounscious
No, I say it's not unconscious, For your Shadow's silhouette in me, Whose force and face I can't always see... I don't know, for it's subconscious. Will you say I can have my way? Or will you haunt me in our Laughter? Laughter without a face is a cry
This poem is super unfinished. I was trying to save the top stanza and the title and accidentally made it public, but I don't have time to finish it now either so.... To be continued! (and filled in, haha)
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Nov 13, 2013
Nov 13, 2013 at 9:58 PM UTC
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