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so you're hurting. perhaps your varicose vessels and veins are tangled like twine, unkempt nest of bats inside your pipes, can't afford a plumber so twisted thoughts and tubes take hostage perhaps every inch, every itch, every itty bitty scratch or scar of skin hurt like a hot iron searing into my fleshly steak, every contact, near miss, every graze stings, like bent needles coated with filth, digging it's way under skin perhaps your heart bleeds white, your eyes ooze black, chopped in half by a hyperbole, broken and duct-taped together like a shabby old car so you're hurting. Don't worry left and right and up and down and here and there and east and west and north and south and everyone's hurting. Everyone's screaming synchronized, some sort of metronome fueled by stabbing and spite so sing! share your sorrows and sadness, go make some noise no one's here to hear, we're all too selfish to care, so sing! be louder than everything. it'll probably fall on deaf ears any way we can make it out of this prison? everyone's hurting, so Don't worry you aren't so different
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Aug 9, 2025
Aug 9, 2025 at 11:08 AM UTC
choir practice
so you're hurting. perhaps your varicose vessels and veins are tangled like twine, unkempt nest of bats inside your pipes, can't afford a plumber so twisted thoughts and tubes take hostage perhaps every inch, every itch, every itty bitty scratch or scar of skin hurt like a hot iron searing into my fleshly steak, every contact, near miss, every graze stings, like bent needles coated with filth, digging it's way under skin perhaps your heart bleeds white, your eyes ooze black, chopped in half by a hyperbole, broken and duct-taped together like a shabby old car so you're hurting. Don't worry left and right and up and down and here and there and east and west and north and south and everyone's hurting. Everyone's screaming synchronized, some sort of metronome fueled by stabbing and spite so sing! share your sorrows and sadness, go make some noise no one's here to hear, we're all too selfish to care, so sing! be louder than everything. it'll probably fall on deaf ears any way we can make it out of this prison? everyone's hurting, so Don't worry you aren't so different
being angsty and edgy is overrated, random = funny
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jsn
Aug 9, 2025
Aug 9, 2025 at 11:08 AM UTC
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