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you got a hook in my heart, and i am trapped, letting you pull me in closer and closer, till you got me whole and raw. you ask my heart, “what do you say?” beat-beat, you got a hold of me, beat-beat, i complete your will, replies it. you look into my eyes, and i am weak, losing myself in their depth, falling and falling, never hitting the bottom. you ask my eyes, “what do you hide?” your gaze full of warmth, fiery sparkle— a challenge, as you undress my feelings— i hide my passion, they reply. you pull me in further, stronger, surely; hands weaning the string of attachment, as i near the surface and gasp for air, reaching your stretched hand— softness, tenderness spins my head— my body, my traitor, as my feet buckle, only to see myself in your embrace.
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Jul 27, 2025
Jul 27, 2025 at 1:38 PM UTC
fish in the water
you got a hook in my heart, and i am trapped, letting you pull me in closer and closer, till you got me whole and raw. you ask my heart, “what do you say?” beat-beat, you got a hold of me, beat-beat, i complete your will, replies it. you look into my eyes, and i am weak, losing myself in their depth, falling and falling, never hitting the bottom. you ask my eyes, “what do you hide?” your gaze full of warmth, fiery sparkle— a challenge, as you undress my feelings— i hide my passion, they reply. you pull me in further, stronger, surely; hands weaning the string of attachment, as i near the surface and gasp for air, reaching your stretched hand— softness, tenderness spins my head— my body, my traitor, as my feet buckle, only to see myself in your embrace.
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Jul 27, 2025
Jul 27, 2025 at 1:38 PM UTC
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