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the water is pulling me in pulling me under churning around me as my lungs fill with the salty ocean spray I hear the name of the maelstrom loneliness loneliness is drowning me deep into its depths this maelstrom of loneliness is killing me will it ever end? will I ever swim to shore and escape it's wrath? maybe hope is in the horizon
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Aug 28, 2025
Aug 28, 2025 at 12:10 PM UTC
maelstrom
the water is pulling me in pulling me under churning around me as my lungs fill with the salty ocean spray I hear the name of the maelstrom loneliness loneliness is drowning me deep into its depths this maelstrom of loneliness is killing me will it ever end? will I ever swim to shore and escape it's wrath? maybe hope is in the horizon
maelstrom: a powerful whirlpool in the sea or a river
theperilouspoet77
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Aug 28, 2025
Aug 28, 2025 at 12:10 PM UTC
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