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I see him dancing Like hell's flames Oh, those candy lips Never leave Like hell's flames The devil of love Never leave I couldn't bear it The devil of love If I ever lost those lips I couldn't bear it Hold me in your pyre I see him dancing Hair of smoke Oh, those candy lips Come to me
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Jul 23, 2025
Jul 23, 2025 at 8:08 AM UTC
I see him dancing-like hell's flames
I see him dancing Like hell's flames Oh, those candy lips Never leave Like hell's flames The devil of love Never leave I couldn't bear it The devil of love If I ever lost those lips I couldn't bear it Hold me in your pyre I see him dancing Hair of smoke Oh, those candy lips Come to me
My first attempt at a pantoum
Piano_man33
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16/M/Delaware
Jul 23, 2025
Jul 23, 2025 at 8:08 AM UTC
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