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A spark screaming cries of a newborn, it is given skin that can be remade or destroyed. Man opens its mouth muttering from its lips that is forced into our canvas-- labels, beliefs, aesthetics, morality, culture, and flavor. Most stand on this layer, not know what may be below our comfortable heels. When man becomes curious, the layer fades slowly, as we fall. Laws, materials, perspectives, awareness, theories, and religions. This is the layer where most of us-- are comfortable, yet we fear what may be below us. When man becomes critical, the air feels suffocating to the point our feet feel the sweat that comes from the skin. The layers fades slowly as we fall. Self, i, conscious, subconscious, desire, and ideals. This layer is full of echoing screams of despair. Below us is what truly trembles one's soul, one's realm, one's given meaning, and one's identity. When man becomes unusual, a middlemist red blooming in isolation, the layer fades slowly as we fall. Nothing,- but a lonely man in a small collective chamber. We only have the choice to either; fade away to the end, stay in the absurd, or create out of raw energy. There is no noise, no man's truth, no sunshine, and no home. Above all is what was created by man. There is only a naked space that spews fear at us, so harsh and cruel that we try to stay above it as a way to escape from it; wrap it in lies, or stare at it. And yet here, something still follows us, something that we carry within us, the core that made us man, our emotions that remain within, experiences that pass through our senses, memories that live like bubbles, nature that gives us warmth that arrived long before us, beauty that we tell from our eyes and how we feel, harmony that keeps us together through a zigzag string, and love, which enables all and make us go coo-coo. Bit by bit, the void reveals countless meanings that are above the bottom. The ones, that have existed, or are reshaping and reforming, the ones, that keeps us alive, the ones, that truly makes us,- fear death itself-- unless numbed.
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Jul 17, 2025
Jul 17, 2025 at 7:42 PM UTC
Layers Made by Man
A spark screaming cries of a newborn, it is given skin that can be remade or destroyed. Man opens its mouth muttering from its lips that is forced into our canvas-- labels, beliefs, aesthetics, morality, culture, and flavor. Most stand on this layer, not know what may be below our comfortable heels. When man becomes curious, the layer fades slowly, as we fall. Laws, materials, perspectives, awareness, theories, and religions. This is the layer where most of us-- are comfortable, yet we fear what may be below us. When man becomes critical, the air feels suffocating to the point our feet feel the sweat that comes from the skin. The layers fades slowly as we fall. Self, i, conscious, subconscious, desire, and ideals. This layer is full of echoing screams of despair. Below us is what truly trembles one's soul, one's realm, one's given meaning, and one's identity. When man becomes unusual, a middlemist red blooming in isolation, the layer fades slowly as we fall. Nothing,- but a lonely man in a small collective chamber. We only have the choice to either; fade away to the end, stay in the absurd, or create out of raw energy. There is no noise, no man's truth, no sunshine, and no home. Above all is what was created by man. There is only a naked space that spews fear at us, so harsh and cruel that we try to stay above it as a way to escape from it; wrap it in lies, or stare at it. And yet here, something still follows us, something that we carry within us, the core that made us man, our emotions that remain within, experiences that pass through our senses, memories that live like bubbles, nature that gives us warmth that arrived long before us, beauty that we tell from our eyes and how we feel, harmony that keeps us together through a zigzag string, and love, which enables all and make us go coo-coo. Bit by bit, the void reveals countless meanings that are above the bottom. The ones, that have existed, or are reshaping and reforming, the ones, that keeps us alive, the ones, that truly makes us,- fear death itself-- unless numbed.
jaiden_noviqon
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Jul 17, 2025
Jul 17, 2025 at 7:42 PM UTC
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