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Helen and you walked home from school the long way you wanted to show her the man in the pie and mash shop cutting up eels for jellied eels or for the pies how he would stand there with his knife and take up an eel and holding it firmly on a board would cut off its head and then proceed to slice it up into small pieces and into a bucket on the floor and when you showed her standing outside the shop peering through the window she said O my God and put a hand to her mouth and spoke through her hand and added poor eels to end up in someone's stomach and the way he cuts them up and the pieces still moving afterwards and she moved away and walked up the road still holding a hand over her mouth you don't fancy pie and mash then? you said not with eels in it no she replied through her fingers you smiled not funny she said poor little eel creatures yes I guess it is a bit brutal you said but fascinating to watch I don't think so she said taking her hand from her mouth you both went under the subway of the junction she slightly in front of you her two plaits of hair bouncing as she walked her green raincoat tied tight about her you whistled so that it echoed along the subway bouncing off the walls all along the artificial lights giving off a surreal sensation how can people eat eels? she asked just the sight puts me off don't know guess they don't think of it being eels as such just as something to eat you said you both came out of the subway on the other side and walked along the New Kent Road by the cinema she looking at the billboards through her thick lens glasses are you sure your mum doesn't mind having me for tea? she said well we're not actually having you for tea we usually have beans on toast or jam sandwiches she slapped your hand you know what I mean she said smiling no Mum don't mind you said she invited you after all I pleaded against it but she wouldn't listen you said smiling Helen's face frowned and she stood still really? she said no I'm joking you said and she nodded her head uncertainly looking at you through her glasses I'm just kidding you said you touched her hand she smiled and you both walked on and across the bomb site the uneven ground the puddles of rainwater you your mother's son and Helen a lucky woman's daughter.
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Nov 11, 2013
Nov 11, 2013 at 2:27 AM UTC
A LUCKY WOMAN'S DAUGHTER.
Helen and you walked home from school the long way you wanted to show her the man in the pie and mash shop cutting up eels for jellied eels or for the pies how he would stand there with his knife and take up an eel and holding it firmly on a board would cut off its head and then proceed to slice it up into small pieces and into a bucket on the floor and when you showed her standing outside the shop peering through the window she said O my God and put a hand to her mouth and spoke through her hand and added poor eels to end up in someone's stomach and the way he cuts them up and the pieces still moving afterwards and she moved away and walked up the road still holding a hand over her mouth you don't fancy pie and mash then? you said not with eels in it no she replied through her fingers you smiled not funny she said poor little eel creatures yes I guess it is a bit brutal you said but fascinating to watch I don't think so she said taking her hand from her mouth you both went under the subway of the junction she slightly in front of you her two plaits of hair bouncing as she walked her green raincoat tied tight about her you whistled so that it echoed along the subway bouncing off the walls all along the artificial lights giving off a surreal sensation how can people eat eels? she asked just the sight puts me off don't know guess they don't think of it being eels as such just as something to eat you said you both came out of the subway on the other side and walked along the New Kent Road by the cinema she looking at the billboards through her thick lens glasses are you sure your mum doesn't mind having me for tea? she said well we're not actually having you for tea we usually have beans on toast or jam sandwiches she slapped your hand you know what I mean she said smiling no Mum don't mind you said she invited you after all I pleaded against it but she wouldn't listen you said smiling Helen's face frowned and she stood still really? she said no I'm joking you said and she nodded her head uncertainly looking at you through her glasses I'm just kidding you said you touched her hand she smiled and you both walked on and across the bomb site the uneven ground the puddles of rainwater you your mother's son and Helen a lucky woman's daughter.
BOY AND GIRL IN 1950S LONDON.
terry-collett
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Nov 11, 2013
Nov 11, 2013 at 2:27 AM UTC
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