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a nice young golden dog, barks, joyful. i think it's smiling. following confusion: vigil nights, unstructured rhytms. the timing of loneliness. everytime, searching. everything, nothing. emotions in motion, no reaction. close coming determined full moon. a journey searching understanding. what am i expecting to receibe? the same i give away with my foolish acting? (cannot remember my dreams) why is always such a mess sharing? (dreaming is searching) endless red sky. filling concrete with tired, golden leaves. eyes moving, tightening. veins full of blood, feeling. is that freedom? outside, a beatiful warm afternoon, smiles.
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Nov 10, 2013
Nov 10, 2013 at 11:45 PM UTC
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a nice young golden dog, barks, joyful. i think it's smiling. following confusion: vigil nights, unstructured rhytms. the timing of loneliness. everytime, searching. everything, nothing. emotions in motion, no reaction. close coming determined full moon. a journey searching understanding. what am i expecting to receibe? the same i give away with my foolish acting? (cannot remember my dreams) why is always such a mess sharing? (dreaming is searching) endless red sky. filling concrete with tired, golden leaves. eyes moving, tightening. veins full of blood, feeling. is that freedom? outside, a beatiful warm afternoon, smiles.
joaquin-cruzalegui
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Nov 10, 2013
Nov 10, 2013 at 11:45 PM UTC
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