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"I hope in thee for us." Gabriel Marcel When we share hope our bond is real And when our voices chant a blended song, Our ties are strong as tempered steel. In fractious times with wrath surreal, We seek out friends among the throng. Without shared hope no bond is real. But when our wills cause us to feel Soul-bound to search, however long For ties as strong as tempered steel, Without a sign, the fates reveal A newfound friend who's come along To share our hope; our bond is real! With zest our common course we seal Impelled by duty’s civic song. Our ties are strong as tempered steel, With reason's light to fire our zeal, We rise to challenge fortune’s wrong. When we share hope our bond is real; Our ties are strong as tempered steel.
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Jun 27, 2025
Jun 27, 2025 at 10:10 AM UTC
Covenants (Modified Villanelle)
"I hope in thee for us." Gabriel Marcel When we share hope our bond is real And when our voices chant a blended song, Our ties are strong as tempered steel. In fractious times with wrath surreal, We seek out friends among the throng. Without shared hope no bond is real. But when our wills cause us to feel Soul-bound to search, however long For ties as strong as tempered steel, Without a sign, the fates reveal A newfound friend who's come along To share our hope; our bond is real! With zest our common course we seal Impelled by duty’s civic song. Our ties are strong as tempered steel, With reason's light to fire our zeal, We rise to challenge fortune’s wrong. When we share hope our bond is real; Our ties are strong as tempered steel.
In this version of Covenants, the lines that would be identical in a classic villanelle are sometimes varied. I would be interested in knowing which version you think works better.
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Jun 27, 2025
Jun 27, 2025 at 10:10 AM UTC
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