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Your eyes were capsized from the moment that I first saw them, long ago broken shallow pieces without depth or substance. abandoned left motionless barely showing a glimmer of the light behind them. and so I sit and wait with any kind of hope to help keep you afloat. you were the woman barely audible in the coffee line before me. and I all of a sudden was the witness to all of the pirates that had left your life in shambles over the years, and in that moment we were one.
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Jun 23, 2025
Jun 23, 2025 at 8:00 PM UTC
first meeting
Your eyes were capsized from the moment that I first saw them, long ago broken shallow pieces without depth or substance. abandoned left motionless barely showing a glimmer of the light behind them. and so I sit and wait with any kind of hope to help keep you afloat. you were the woman barely audible in the coffee line before me. and I all of a sudden was the witness to all of the pirates that had left your life in shambles over the years, and in that moment we were one.
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Jun 23, 2025
Jun 23, 2025 at 8:00 PM UTC
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