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To make it right, you can take away until only skin and bones remain. With elixirs you can reign over pleasure and pain, you can go on, feeling only frustration that there is something missing, that in this piece you cannot find more than a morsel of dignity, which wouldn't bother you so much except that you can sense the potential for so much more.
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Nov 9, 2013
Nov 9, 2013 at 8:48 AM UTC
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To make it right, you can take away until only skin and bones remain. With elixirs you can reign over pleasure and pain, you can go on, feeling only frustration that there is something missing, that in this piece you cannot find more than a morsel of dignity, which wouldn't bother you so much except that you can sense the potential for so much more.
michael-17
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Nov 9, 2013
Nov 9, 2013 at 8:48 AM UTC
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