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The price I paid for opening my heart was way more heavy then it seemed, I not being able to love again or feel any emotions, An empty feeling inside me growing everyday just  to devour me, How much lonely i had became just because i opened my heart, Trying to feel loved, Cared and understood, But all i ever received was nothing just pity and mockery, In their eyes a foolish boy who opened his heart, Thinking he would be understood, his feeling would have meaning and he would feel less lonely, but may be that was not in his fate, The more he opened the more he felt lonely, misunderstood and ignored, After that he learned opening yourself is not a good thing, so he started to trap his feelings, his emotions and his loneliness inside him, But the more he trapped the more they grow, Breaking him into pieces from the inside, The more he tried to stay composed the more crumbled he was from the inside, The darkness in him waiting patiently for him to lose himself so he can take control, He isolated himself from the people, Even from those he adored once, Because                 Thats the price he paid....                                                               Anonymous
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Jun 21, 2025
Jun 21, 2025 at 4:14 AM UTC
The Price I paid
The price I paid for opening my heart was way more heavy then it seemed, I not being able to love again or feel any emotions, An empty feeling inside me growing everyday just  to devour me, How much lonely i had became just because i opened my heart, Trying to feel loved, Cared and understood, But all i ever received was nothing just pity and mockery, In their eyes a foolish boy who opened his heart, Thinking he would be understood, his feeling would have meaning and he would feel less lonely, but may be that was not in his fate, The more he opened the more he felt lonely, misunderstood and ignored, After that he learned opening yourself is not a good thing, so he started to trap his feelings, his emotions and his loneliness inside him, But the more he trapped the more they grow, Breaking him into pieces from the inside, The more he tried to stay composed the more crumbled he was from the inside, The darkness in him waiting patiently for him to lose himself so he can take control, He isolated himself from the people, Even from those he adored once, Because                 Thats the price he paid....                                                               Anonymous
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ash-19
Jun 21, 2025
Jun 21, 2025 at 4:14 AM UTC
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