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Throughout my life, i've bumped into Too many commas Yet, we never need a comma In a love sentence. Let alone a question mark "I love you?" Yeah that doesn't sound right Not even quotation marks should be there In a love sentence. For now, i left out the apostrophe Since i do not want to abbreviate Every moment we spent Abbreviation is not needed In a love sentence. How about an exclamation mark? I love you so much But an exclamation mark Seems a little too much We don't need that either In a love sentence. You. Are the dot in every love sentence. I would still have it without you It was just Incomplete It was just Unfinished Hence, I love you. That would be it.
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Jun 18, 2025
Jun 18, 2025 at 8:42 AM UTC
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Throughout my life, i've bumped into Too many commas Yet, we never need a comma In a love sentence. Let alone a question mark "I love you?" Yeah that doesn't sound right Not even quotation marks should be there In a love sentence. For now, i left out the apostrophe Since i do not want to abbreviate Every moment we spent Abbreviation is not needed In a love sentence. How about an exclamation mark? I love you so much But an exclamation mark Seems a little too much We don't need that either In a love sentence. You. Are the dot in every love sentence. I would still have it without you It was just Incomplete It was just Unfinished Hence, I love you. That would be it.
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Jun 18, 2025
Jun 18, 2025 at 8:42 AM UTC
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