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Kids outside, you’re only 5 You were so young, time spent inside, no youth you said it does something to you. You chased love, 3 blocks, but she left, your first heartbreak. Years Down the road, love reintroduces himself, you give nurturing love, 2 beautiful kids, repaid in black & blue. He fractures & bruises, and you lie. Swallow your pride. Two years of drafting silence but then you speak. Away you Get. But life detest you again, every chance it gets. He just turned 18, crash, a wreck, He didn’t even get a chance, a mother’s son. Then again in Cold Blood, the world took the other one, 7 times in back he shot. The daughter, also a mother, could she even fight back. What were there final thoughts ? She’ll never know. You’ve taken both from this world, back to raising someone on my own again. No Job, making ends meet. Sirens Blare, but not in defeat. You deserve peace I say. A Happy Ending, she’ll soundly sleep.
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Jun 14, 2025
Jun 14, 2025 at 7:22 PM UTC
Love Returned
Kids outside, you’re only 5 You were so young, time spent inside, no youth you said it does something to you. You chased love, 3 blocks, but she left, your first heartbreak. Years Down the road, love reintroduces himself, you give nurturing love, 2 beautiful kids, repaid in black & blue. He fractures & bruises, and you lie. Swallow your pride. Two years of drafting silence but then you speak. Away you Get. But life detest you again, every chance it gets. He just turned 18, crash, a wreck, He didn’t even get a chance, a mother’s son. Then again in Cold Blood, the world took the other one, 7 times in back he shot. The daughter, also a mother, could she even fight back. What were there final thoughts ? She’ll never know. You’ve taken both from this world, back to raising someone on my own again. No Job, making ends meet. Sirens Blare, but not in defeat. You deserve peace I say. A Happy Ending, she’ll soundly sleep.
a beginners poem!! With mentions of heavy topics about de*th. This is about living with my Grandmother as a 20 year old and what I’ve feel.
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Jun 14, 2025
Jun 14, 2025 at 7:22 PM UTC
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