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In moments like these i feel every weight of every planet Rest on my shoulders i see the heavens form against me, Hell tries to side with me… Every star in existence Watching my fate crash right in front of me i stand on the moon watching, Watching from a far away distance the earth, Where I watch you live your every day life. You’re my entire world and don’t even know it… Maybe it’s a hyper fixation Because you show me true kindness i find my self turning red, Something i never did before… i find myself waiting for a reply Something i used to never care for… It’s the unfortunate truth But is something i must explain to you, I’m torn between reality and spirituality What’s real and what’s fantasy How i live my life, i am on a separate plane of existence Forced to answer to a being… A being the size of 300 skyscrapers All stacked in one… A being that’s devoured everything i’ve ever cared for… A being with a never ending devour for lust… It feeds off the love i ever gave to any planet… You’re my earth... i don’t want you to become a victim of this destruction So i run away from you… When reality i am changing my course, So you wouldn’t be hurt… As i ride the cosmos Passing by other planets in the distance, None could ever compare to you… The lonely silver surfer… Writes a Lonely Soul’s Poem
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Jun 23, 2025
Jun 23, 2025 at 10:11 PM UTC
The Lonely Silver Surfer
In moments like these i feel every weight of every planet Rest on my shoulders i see the heavens form against me, Hell tries to side with me… Every star in existence Watching my fate crash right in front of me i stand on the moon watching, Watching from a far away distance the earth, Where I watch you live your every day life. You’re my entire world and don’t even know it… Maybe it’s a hyper fixation Because you show me true kindness i find my self turning red, Something i never did before… i find myself waiting for a reply Something i used to never care for… It’s the unfortunate truth But is something i must explain to you, I’m torn between reality and spirituality What’s real and what’s fantasy How i live my life, i am on a separate plane of existence Forced to answer to a being… A being the size of 300 skyscrapers All stacked in one… A being that’s devoured everything i’ve ever cared for… A being with a never ending devour for lust… It feeds off the love i ever gave to any planet… You’re my earth... i don’t want you to become a victim of this destruction So i run away from you… When reality i am changing my course, So you wouldn’t be hurt… As i ride the cosmos Passing by other planets in the distance, None could ever compare to you… The lonely silver surfer… Writes a Lonely Soul’s Poem
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23/M/somewhere in space
Jun 23, 2025
Jun 23, 2025 at 10:11 PM UTC
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