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The world I walk through is a deep cavern 
 filled with cool air and brilliant water.

 I jump from puddle to puddle weeping 
at all the wonders my little chasm is filled with. 

 My feet carry me in syncopated skips to those small funnels 
 where the invisible breeze tickles and sings in my ears. 

 My breath gives me pause to reminisce on how lucky I am. 

 These various rhythms of enthralling fascinations 
 leave lasting echoes that reverberate off my cavernous edge 
 feeding upon one another, until the cacophony is too painful for me to ignore. 

                                                                                           I must rest until it passes. ...Walking with you                                    ...that steady pace you take...                               
                                                 resonates against my walls. 

 All I have to do to is match your step 
and marvel at how the echoes sync 
with every one of your resounding steps. 
 
 Each in turn, building upon the last into a glorious orchestra. 
 They shake my stones until one little loose rock comes plummeting down. 

In its stead,                a wondrous beam of light shines radiance through my dusty air. 

                                                        (sfumato)      My all enveloping world is no longer. 
I know there is more for me,                                                    far away.
 A world of light, 
        A world of joy,                 A world of love                           Out beyond these beautiful walls. 
 ...I am weak                                                           and my world crumbles
                                       from the beauty your footfalls have left on my soul
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Nov 7, 2013
Nov 7, 2013 at 11:01 PM UTC
Footfalls in the Dark
The world I walk through is a deep cavern 
 filled with cool air and brilliant water.

 I jump from puddle to puddle weeping 
at all the wonders my little chasm is filled with. 

 My feet carry me in syncopated skips to those small funnels 
 where the invisible breeze tickles and sings in my ears. 

 My breath gives me pause to reminisce on how lucky I am. 

 These various rhythms of enthralling fascinations 
 leave lasting echoes that reverberate off my cavernous edge 
 feeding upon one another, until the cacophony is too painful for me to ignore. 

                                                                                           I must rest until it passes. ...Walking with you                                    ...that steady pace you take...                               
                                                 resonates against my walls. 

 All I have to do to is match your step 
and marvel at how the echoes sync 
with every one of your resounding steps. 
 
 Each in turn, building upon the last into a glorious orchestra. 
 They shake my stones until one little loose rock comes plummeting down. 

In its stead,                a wondrous beam of light shines radiance through my dusty air. 

                                                        (sfumato)      My all enveloping world is no longer. 
I know there is more for me,                                                    far away.
 A world of light, 
        A world of joy,                 A world of love                           Out beyond these beautiful walls. 
 ...I am weak                                                           and my world crumbles
                                       from the beauty your footfalls have left on my soul
ilia-talalai
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Nov 7, 2013
Nov 7, 2013 at 11:01 PM UTC
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