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I got to see your face tonight, isn't it amazing how technology works? Although I don't like to say, "got", really, because it doesn't sound too poetic, really, and it would only be true if I had you. Sure, I was given a chance to see your face, and that gift I would gladly take anyway, anyday. But I wish I could behold you in person, have you next to me. It's only that you are out there, while I am in here... see? What's the use in complaining though, who am I to distress? I have so many blessings, in the scheme of things, this is but a tiny test. So I'll just keep truckin', as the people seem to say, and rejoice in the comfort that we'll see each other soon, some day.
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Nov 6, 2013
Nov 6, 2013 at 10:10 PM UTC
You've "got" me
I got to see your face tonight, isn't it amazing how technology works? Although I don't like to say, "got", really, because it doesn't sound too poetic, really, and it would only be true if I had you. Sure, I was given a chance to see your face, and that gift I would gladly take anyway, anyday. But I wish I could behold you in person, have you next to me. It's only that you are out there, while I am in here... see? What's the use in complaining though, who am I to distress? I have so many blessings, in the scheme of things, this is but a tiny test. So I'll just keep truckin', as the people seem to say, and rejoice in the comfort that we'll see each other soon, some day.
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Nov 6, 2013
Nov 6, 2013 at 10:10 PM UTC
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