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My thoughts spiral, like a whirlpool, feeling anxious and lonely, trapped in loops of thoughts, staring at the night sky, wondering if my life would improve, like a bird flying freely through the meadows, saying, "I'm free!" Yet my negative thoughts don't perish, reciting a man's cry in a psych ward, like a homeless man begging for supplies and freedom, while being misunderstood, But no luck. I continue thinking negatively, becoming used to feeling lonely, and commencing activities alone, manifesting for peace and happiness, to assure my inner child that my life will eventually become better, like a plant regrowing from its dead roots. I continue, unexpectedly meeting new people, whom I can cherish, being understood and included, continuously improving myself to the best of my abilities, becoming that one person I dream of being, living a happy and peaceful life.
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May 28, 2025
May 28, 2025 at 11:49 AM UTC
The Ambivalence of Life
My thoughts spiral, like a whirlpool, feeling anxious and lonely, trapped in loops of thoughts, staring at the night sky, wondering if my life would improve, like a bird flying freely through the meadows, saying, "I'm free!" Yet my negative thoughts don't perish, reciting a man's cry in a psych ward, like a homeless man begging for supplies and freedom, while being misunderstood, But no luck. I continue thinking negatively, becoming used to feeling lonely, and commencing activities alone, manifesting for peace and happiness, to assure my inner child that my life will eventually become better, like a plant regrowing from its dead roots. I continue, unexpectedly meeting new people, whom I can cherish, being understood and included, continuously improving myself to the best of my abilities, becoming that one person I dream of being, living a happy and peaceful life.
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May 28, 2025
May 28, 2025 at 11:49 AM UTC
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