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I said goodbye, still waving goodbye, Watching the steps you're leaving behind, My hands are trembling, I whisper why, The day has come, no words I find. Like a falling rain, the tears I cry, Would you stay here, don't you mind? If you turned back, if you gave it a try, To see the memories you left to remind. Our dreams were castles in the sky As a heavenly kingdom, the stars aligned No one dared look or be there so high Was that all a truth you’ve just denied?
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May 25, 2025
May 25, 2025 at 4:53 PM UTC
4. Still Waving Goodbye
I said goodbye, still waving goodbye, Watching the steps you're leaving behind, My hands are trembling, I whisper why, The day has come, no words I find. Like a falling rain, the tears I cry, Would you stay here, don't you mind? If you turned back, if you gave it a try, To see the memories you left to remind. Our dreams were castles in the sky As a heavenly kingdom, the stars aligned No one dared look or be there so high Was that all a truth you’ve just denied?
This poem is dedicated to the nine beloved children of Dr. Alaa Alnajar — innocent lives lost in Palestine. It is a mother’s silent cry, a tribute to love, loss, and the pain of goodbye. 🕊️ May their memory be eternal. May the world never forget.
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May 25, 2025
May 25, 2025 at 4:53 PM UTC
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