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You dance better than me You sing better than me Prettier, taller, smarter Well **** you are as perfect as a Barbie I’m as interesting as nothing compared to you. You can get whatever you want with a snap of a finger. Make guys fall for you at the speed of light. I am nothing compared to you You make me look at MYSELF and say “I’m nothing” You do so many things I can do. I write. You write better I draw You draw better Well I bet your poem is better than mine I do something and ****** I know you can do it better. All I want is to be better than you at something. No matter how small. I want to be better. Confident. Pretty hair. Thin. I am nothing compared to you
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Nov 5, 2013
Nov 5, 2013 at 7:28 AM UTC
I am nothing compared to you...
You dance better than me You sing better than me Prettier, taller, smarter Well **** you are as perfect as a Barbie I’m as interesting as nothing compared to you. You can get whatever you want with a snap of a finger. Make guys fall for you at the speed of light. I am nothing compared to you You make me look at MYSELF and say “I’m nothing” You do so many things I can do. I write. You write better I draw You draw better Well I bet your poem is better than mine I do something and ****** I know you can do it better. All I want is to be better than you at something. No matter how small. I want to be better. Confident. Pretty hair. Thin. I am nothing compared to you
Please give me some comments of what you think of my poem and what I should do to improve my writing. It is the first one I wrote and published. :) Hope you enjoy x.
#love#jealousy
stxlle
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stxlle
20/F/Filipino
Nov 5, 2013
Nov 5, 2013 at 7:28 AM UTC
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