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I wonder— do the trees feel empty in winter, like abandoned cathedrals with hollowed arches, their prayers carried off by wind? Do they mourn the once-gold choir of leaves, or do they wait— hands lifted in quiet faith, hope braided into their roots like a forgotten hymn? Does the moon know she is not always whole? That we love her in pieces— when she is a shard of silver, a lost earring in the sky. Does she ache, too, a lantern adrift in a sea of indifference, admired but never held? There is beauty, I think, in what is missing— in the pause before bloom, in the ache of becoming. The tree, the moon— they teach us how to stay even when we are not full. Maybe they know. Maybe they don’t. But still—they remain. And maybe that is enough.
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May 1, 2025
May 1, 2025 at 11:39 AM UTC
Do the trees know ?
I wonder— do the trees feel empty in winter, like abandoned cathedrals with hollowed arches, their prayers carried off by wind? Do they mourn the once-gold choir of leaves, or do they wait— hands lifted in quiet faith, hope braided into their roots like a forgotten hymn? Does the moon know she is not always whole? That we love her in pieces— when she is a shard of silver, a lost earring in the sky. Does she ache, too, a lantern adrift in a sea of indifference, admired but never held? There is beauty, I think, in what is missing— in the pause before bloom, in the ache of becoming. The tree, the moon— they teach us how to stay even when we are not full. Maybe they know. Maybe they don’t. But still—they remain. And maybe that is enough.
Shanii
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25/F/Free State
May 1, 2025
May 1, 2025 at 11:39 AM UTC
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