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We both had enough of the poison Springtime So you picked me up, and you started driving.                The street's Westbound,                 rain and wipers pound. We can be reborn if we can just depart                              our town. Race away--                   --like we'd set fire to Bon-Ton Lose a day...                    ...take 84 past the county line.                Let the rain keep time on the sunroof                                   'til we're fine.                               Do they ever feel it?                                 --Someone does!                           The grinding. Rewinding,                                 hit play to repeat                                           and then                                           get paid.                                         The payoff?                                       You'll stave off                           14 lies from their dead end eyes                                      for one fortnight.                                         Be forthright.                                         Am I blind?                                    Or do I detect that                                our headaches kind of rhyme? Make us reborn this time; phoenix down and back upright. Continued the drive and the world we're righting.                                  We killed our time                                and came back to life Just in time to return to our twinkling                                          town lights. When we have our fill of the pissant Summer, let me pick you up and we'll head out driving.                    past the Cannery                 until Rouse turns free our zipped up obits that we can't speak                           cleanly. Race away--                   --like we'd set fire to Bon-Ton Lose a day...                    ...take 84 past the county line.                Let the rain keep time on the sunroof                                   'til we're fine.                                 Let the rain keep time                                     on the sunroof.                                You'll be fine...
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Apr 23, 2025
Apr 23, 2025 at 2:28 PM UTC
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We both had enough of the poison Springtime So you picked me up, and you started driving.                The street's Westbound,                 rain and wipers pound. We can be reborn if we can just depart                              our town. Race away--                   --like we'd set fire to Bon-Ton Lose a day...                    ...take 84 past the county line.                Let the rain keep time on the sunroof                                   'til we're fine.                               Do they ever feel it?                                 --Someone does!                           The grinding. Rewinding,                                 hit play to repeat                                           and then                                           get paid.                                         The payoff?                                       You'll stave off                           14 lies from their dead end eyes                                      for one fortnight.                                         Be forthright.                                         Am I blind?                                    Or do I detect that                                our headaches kind of rhyme? Make us reborn this time; phoenix down and back upright. Continued the drive and the world we're righting.                                  We killed our time                                and came back to life Just in time to return to our twinkling                                          town lights. When we have our fill of the pissant Summer, let me pick you up and we'll head out driving.                    past the Cannery                 until Rouse turns free our zipped up obits that we can't speak                           cleanly. Race away--                   --like we'd set fire to Bon-Ton Lose a day...                    ...take 84 past the county line.                Let the rain keep time on the sunroof                                   'til we're fine.                                 Let the rain keep time                                     on the sunroof.                                You'll be fine...
Put it up. Deleted it cuz I thought it ****** Put it back cuz I thought "eeeh it's not THAT bad."
kyle-kulseth
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Apr 23, 2025
Apr 23, 2025 at 2:28 PM UTC
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