Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
From ashes, I rise, no crown, no name, Forged in fire, untamed by shame. Each fall, a step, each scar, a light, In darkness, I carve my endless fight. I seek no praise, no fleeting fame, I burn within, I am my flame. Not for the weak, nor for the crowd— I rise alone, unbroken, proud. The world may tremble, the storm may roar, But I will stand, forever more. For strength is born from deepest pain, And through the loss, I’ll rise again.
0
Apr 18, 2025
Apr 18, 2025 at 11:55 AM UTC
"Unyielding"
From ashes, I rise, no crown, no name, Forged in fire, untamed by shame. Each fall, a step, each scar, a light, In darkness, I carve my endless fight. I seek no praise, no fleeting fame, I burn within, I am my flame. Not for the weak, nor for the crowd— I rise alone, unbroken, proud. The world may tremble, the storm may roar, But I will stand, forever more. For strength is born from deepest pain, And through the loss, I’ll rise again.
I noticed that the original Golden, I Rise didn’t receive the recognition I hoped for, so I took it upon myself to refine the message. This new version, Unyielding, is a more focused, powerful expression of the core philosophy I’ve been striving to convey. It's direct, and every word is crafted to emphasize resilience, inner strength, and the relentless drive to rise above adversity. I believe this captures the essence of what I wanted to say in a clearer, more impactful way.
ahmed-gamel
Written by
16/M/egypt
Apr 18, 2025
Apr 18, 2025 at 11:55 AM UTC
Request permission to use this poem