Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
It told me the faster you run, the more you miss. That growing up isn't something you notice- until you can't go back. It said you will lose people who loved you deepley, and still feel like it was your fault. And letting go? It's not peace at first. Sometimes it feels like betrayal with a ribbon on it. I asked, how do I know I'm doing it right? Time exhaled. And said, "Because it hurts less than holding on did."
0
Apr 15, 2025
Apr 15, 2025 at 3:44 PM UTC
I Asked Time if It Ever Slows Down
It told me the faster you run, the more you miss. That growing up isn't something you notice- until you can't go back. It said you will lose people who loved you deepley, and still feel like it was your fault. And letting go? It's not peace at first. Sometimes it feels like betrayal with a ribbon on it. I asked, how do I know I'm doing it right? Time exhaled. And said, "Because it hurts less than holding on did."
For anyone still learning how to let go without losing themselves. Growth isn't loud-but it's real
Nev18
Written by
17/F/United States
Apr 15, 2025
Apr 15, 2025 at 3:44 PM UTC
Request permission to use this poem