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Two men, both having recently used “Just for Men Touch of Grey”, Stood waiting for their valet-parked cars, Making idle conversation, When a boy- no, he was a man I suppose, Floated by Like a cracked brown leaf Buffeted on cold wind Down the sidewalk and around the corner, His brow crumpled and knotted Dull eyed and rattling. A blue wool coat, only just barely too big Hung on his shoulders. “What do you make of that man, Well fed and dressed, Looking like a kicked dog?” Asked the first man “Why don't you ask him yourself?” Replied the second, Both checking their watches And quickly searching the lot for Their oncoming cars, Fishing in their pockets for An extra little something To give the valets.
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Nov 2, 2013
Nov 2, 2013 at 12:58 AM UTC
Navy Blue Wool
Two men, both having recently used “Just for Men Touch of Grey”, Stood waiting for their valet-parked cars, Making idle conversation, When a boy- no, he was a man I suppose, Floated by Like a cracked brown leaf Buffeted on cold wind Down the sidewalk and around the corner, His brow crumpled and knotted Dull eyed and rattling. A blue wool coat, only just barely too big Hung on his shoulders. “What do you make of that man, Well fed and dressed, Looking like a kicked dog?” Asked the first man “Why don't you ask him yourself?” Replied the second, Both checking their watches And quickly searching the lot for Their oncoming cars, Fishing in their pockets for An extra little something To give the valets.
allen-davis
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Nov 2, 2013
Nov 2, 2013 at 12:58 AM UTC
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