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It took forever for the hot water to get up to my room  Every hotel I get a room in the hot water takes forever to get to me I'm not kidding  And I'm on like the 3rd floor, not the 12th or the 32nd The hotels I stay in don't have 12 stories and definitely don't have 32 But the view was ok The roof of the lobby had a lot of things going on Like big fans and motors and pipes And water in big puddles All the hotels I stay in have a lot of water in big puddles They really do But the girl at the check-in counter really knew what she was doing She checked me in real quick  And she was friendly Most check-in girls are not friendly at all They act like you're a inconvenience to their job Which is checking people in to the hotel Check-in guys too But when they're nice it makes everything seem not so shady  I hate it when people treat you like you're standing in a shadow like you're invisible It makes me feel like they can't see me It really gets annoying after a while Like all they see is a big fan and a lot of water in a big puddle It really does
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Mar 31, 2025
Mar 31, 2025 at 5:41 PM UTC
It took forever for the hot water to get up to my room
It took forever for the hot water to get up to my room  Every hotel I get a room in the hot water takes forever to get to me I'm not kidding  And I'm on like the 3rd floor, not the 12th or the 32nd The hotels I stay in don't have 12 stories and definitely don't have 32 But the view was ok The roof of the lobby had a lot of things going on Like big fans and motors and pipes And water in big puddles All the hotels I stay in have a lot of water in big puddles They really do But the girl at the check-in counter really knew what she was doing She checked me in real quick  And she was friendly Most check-in girls are not friendly at all They act like you're a inconvenience to their job Which is checking people in to the hotel Check-in guys too But when they're nice it makes everything seem not so shady  I hate it when people treat you like you're standing in a shadow like you're invisible It makes me feel like they can't see me It really gets annoying after a while Like all they see is a big fan and a lot of water in a big puddle It really does
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Mar 31, 2025
Mar 31, 2025 at 5:41 PM UTC
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