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And I, who just wanted to get drunk from the curve of her hips during a warm summer day. A starving man, hoping to get a taste of the forbidden fruit, a holy delight. I, who refused to believe in any God, because only her could be the deity I would worship, day and night, in life and death; the mother of beauty, the cause of my weakness. Just to be drowned under all the sins I committed, and the ones I paid, despite my innocence. I, who died on the cold stone, before I could kneel in front of my very own reason to live.
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Mar 21, 2025
Mar 21, 2025 at 4:16 PM UTC
Devotion
And I, who just wanted to get drunk from the curve of her hips during a warm summer day. A starving man, hoping to get a taste of the forbidden fruit, a holy delight. I, who refused to believe in any God, because only her could be the deity I would worship, day and night, in life and death; the mother of beauty, the cause of my weakness. Just to be drowned under all the sins I committed, and the ones I paid, despite my innocence. I, who died on the cold stone, before I could kneel in front of my very own reason to live.
Inspiration: James McAvoy in Atonement (2007)
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23/Non-binary/Spain
Mar 21, 2025
Mar 21, 2025 at 4:16 PM UTC
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