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Drowning in my clouded mind Clarity seems so hard to find Lost, with just myself to blame Wishing for the current to tame It pulls me under, I feel so numb The only sound a fading hum Normality, a thing of the past I wonder how long I can last Twisting in this lonely place No hope at all, not a trace My senses taken; I feel so blind Drowning in my clouded mind
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Mar 5, 2025
Mar 5, 2025 at 12:59 AM UTC
Drowning
Drowning in my clouded mind Clarity seems so hard to find Lost, with just myself to blame Wishing for the current to tame It pulls me under, I feel so numb The only sound a fading hum Normality, a thing of the past I wonder how long I can last Twisting in this lonely place No hope at all, not a trace My senses taken; I feel so blind Drowning in my clouded mind
Another piece from middle school. I’m not a big fan of the title.
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Mar 5, 2025
Mar 5, 2025 at 12:59 AM UTC
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