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5:00 am; the sun has yet to rise. the candlelight stands sentinel on the table, pooling over words, pages, lifelines, pressing on them, drowning them beyond the reach of understanding. My shadow stretches long against the wall desperate to flee yet soldered in place. I choke on air thickened by rancid breath and on words that hang like hollow husks. Somewhere, a nightjar stirs too early, hoodwinked by this false sun I sit idly writing to no one, writing to everything.
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Mar 1, 2025
Mar 1, 2025 at 6:49 PM UTC
False Dawn
5:00 am; the sun has yet to rise. the candlelight stands sentinel on the table, pooling over words, pages, lifelines, pressing on them, drowning them beyond the reach of understanding. My shadow stretches long against the wall desperate to flee yet soldered in place. I choke on air thickened by rancid breath and on words that hang like hollow husks. Somewhere, a nightjar stirs too early, hoodwinked by this false sun I sit idly writing to no one, writing to everything.
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18/F/nowhereland
Mar 1, 2025
Mar 1, 2025 at 6:49 PM UTC
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