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Loneliness lamented, never exempt from tremendous emptiness, relentless against hellbent descent of my own invention; entrenched in mental torment taking up every tenement residence, detention condemns. But summer still incenses mid November in sun scented memories, tempted by your gentlest remnants, still renders me senseless. Daydreamt, ephemeral, almost replenishes and mends until heart hemorrhaging becomes a drenching tempest, like a fist clenching tension holding onto your absence and some semblance of what you meant and yet goodbye you went again.
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Feb 22, 2025
Feb 22, 2025 at 11:48 AM UTC
November Memories (2nd draft)
Loneliness lamented, never exempt from tremendous emptiness, relentless against hellbent descent of my own invention; entrenched in mental torment taking up every tenement residence, detention condemns. But summer still incenses mid November in sun scented memories, tempted by your gentlest remnants, still renders me senseless. Daydreamt, ephemeral, almost replenishes and mends until heart hemorrhaging becomes a drenching tempest, like a fist clenching tension holding onto your absence and some semblance of what you meant and yet goodbye you went again.
Maybe one day I won't feel so **** heartbroken 😑
CatDadJynx
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Feb 22, 2025
Feb 22, 2025 at 11:48 AM UTC
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