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All is silent save the waves, No sparrows chirp their tune No eagles stretch their view Simply the lake and I Should I make noise? Can I be the first to speak? Perhaps those birds will hear my speech? Then that awful silence will break I scream upon the tranquil space Raw and reckless, stripped of grace Will anyone hear–will anyone take? There is no response from the lake My thoughts echo in the silence Again, I scream to no avail Slumping down I slip in, My body splashing with a great all hail As I sink the show is clear Ripples are sent far and near No trace remains of where I fell Gone with me, my noise.
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Feb 17, 2025
Feb 17, 2025 at 10:55 PM UTC
My noise
All is silent save the waves, No sparrows chirp their tune No eagles stretch their view Simply the lake and I Should I make noise? Can I be the first to speak? Perhaps those birds will hear my speech? Then that awful silence will break I scream upon the tranquil space Raw and reckless, stripped of grace Will anyone hear–will anyone take? There is no response from the lake My thoughts echo in the silence Again, I scream to no avail Slumping down I slip in, My body splashing with a great all hail As I sink the show is clear Ripples are sent far and near No trace remains of where I fell Gone with me, my noise.
A take on existentialism I guess.
PoemsbyRidge
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17/M/Canada
Feb 17, 2025
Feb 17, 2025 at 10:55 PM UTC
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