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The sun is broad above the forests, intoxicating, blinding bright. A moment of perfection, flawless, a quiet place, almost a rite of passage for transcending all the measly binds of blood and flesh. I lie beneath the sun, I crawl the veins of this subastral trench. I gaze upon how far I've come, I weep upon what's left to creep, whoever hikes a mountain lone will feel it's hillside twice as steep. Alone with thoughts there's nothing better than doubting your way to the peak. Sometimes I wonder, would I ever walk paths, not knowing where they lead.
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Feb 10, 2025
Feb 10, 2025 at 6:12 PM UTC
Keep crawling
The sun is broad above the forests, intoxicating, blinding bright. A moment of perfection, flawless, a quiet place, almost a rite of passage for transcending all the measly binds of blood and flesh. I lie beneath the sun, I crawl the veins of this subastral trench. I gaze upon how far I've come, I weep upon what's left to creep, whoever hikes a mountain lone will feel it's hillside twice as steep. Alone with thoughts there's nothing better than doubting your way to the peak. Sometimes I wonder, would I ever walk paths, not knowing where they lead.
In times of doubt you can't miss the opportunity to lay it down on paper
david-fesenco
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22/M/Zagreb
Feb 10, 2025
Feb 10, 2025 at 6:12 PM UTC
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