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My father made me a makeshift dollhouse one year for Christmas. It sits in my room now, having been untouched for years. It's cheaply made from a recycled dresser's wood The insides are bare, lacking furniture. When it's obvious flaws are ignored it's sort of perfect. Like it's patheticness has some charm. I can't help but think that it is the perfect metaphor for my family.
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Aug 3, 2010
Aug 3, 2010 at 1:08 PM UTC
From A Prompt: Dollhouse
My father made me a makeshift dollhouse one year for Christmas. It sits in my room now, having been untouched for years. It's cheaply made from a recycled dresser's wood The insides are bare, lacking furniture. When it's obvious flaws are ignored it's sort of perfect. Like it's patheticness has some charm. I can't help but think that it is the perfect metaphor for my family.
Facebook has an awesome person spitting out awesome prompts every day. I have been doing them for a while now. I felt I should share some with you guys.
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Aug 3, 2010
Aug 3, 2010 at 1:08 PM UTC
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