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Half-chuckles flourishing in the night time scene Slow deep breathes connect us Staring into the darkened sky We waited … But nothing came Only a cool wind that blew leaves at our faces And moved my hand onto yours That's when I knew I didn't want to wait for the stars to align I just needed for you to be mine and the elements seemed to agree..!
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Jan 13, 2025
Jan 13, 2025 at 6:20 PM UTC
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Half-chuckles flourishing in the night time scene Slow deep breathes connect us Staring into the darkened sky We waited … But nothing came Only a cool wind that blew leaves at our faces And moved my hand onto yours That's when I knew I didn't want to wait for the stars to align I just needed for you to be mine and the elements seemed to agree..!
After waiting and waiting, day after day, the next words after the 3 dots came to my mind, and I was able to finish the poem in a beautiful way, at least that is what I think.
Tinajero
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Jan 13, 2025
Jan 13, 2025 at 6:20 PM UTC
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