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it must have felt like the world was ending when the great mount vesuvius started erupting but the world didn't end, it kept on spinning and the dead of pompeii are simply mounds of ash no one knew that day would be their last. i could be among those stuck in time because after you erupted, i didn't just die covered with the ash you suffocated me in, i stay reaching for you, forever frozen. my last words still on my tongue, "don't leave" im a pillar pumice right where you left me you were supposed to protect me, but here i am, dead "goodbye," stuck on a phrase i can't comprehend it felt like the world was ending but somehow it kept spinning i understand the people of pompeii because we both died the same way.
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Dec 15, 2024
Dec 15, 2024 at 4:16 PM UTC
pompeii
it must have felt like the world was ending when the great mount vesuvius started erupting but the world didn't end, it kept on spinning and the dead of pompeii are simply mounds of ash no one knew that day would be their last. i could be among those stuck in time because after you erupted, i didn't just die covered with the ash you suffocated me in, i stay reaching for you, forever frozen. my last words still on my tongue, "don't leave" im a pillar pumice right where you left me you were supposed to protect me, but here i am, dead "goodbye," stuck on a phrase i can't comprehend it felt like the world was ending but somehow it kept spinning i understand the people of pompeii because we both died the same way.
what a shame that the living understands the dead.
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Dec 15, 2024
Dec 15, 2024 at 4:16 PM UTC
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