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I saw you sitting underneath the train stop awning, curled up like a comma, trying to punctuate the end of this already miserable day As the rain dropped like pellets from spilled bird seed covering your surroundings in reflections of what you can't see Water splashes from the passing tires in search of a new refuge akin to your unfurling gaze now staring back at mine
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Dec 11, 2024
Dec 11, 2024 at 8:36 PM UTC
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I saw you sitting underneath the train stop awning, curled up like a comma, trying to punctuate the end of this already miserable day As the rain dropped like pellets from spilled bird seed covering your surroundings in reflections of what you can't see Water splashes from the passing tires in search of a new refuge akin to your unfurling gaze now staring back at mine
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27/M/Boston
Dec 11, 2024
Dec 11, 2024 at 8:36 PM UTC
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