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It begins With fiery jokes about Canada   And your hair, blazing, untamed Is it maybe your stunning mind I am simmering, 180 degrees Perhaps it is the cookies we bake,   The stories we share, the laughter we shape With such SERIOUS faces I could look at you for hours. Your beauty defies all words But it's not even that — Your charm and confidence  — you wear them like a crown —I know it must hurt It could be your ambition That I truly love so much This burning sensation is so strange I know you won't like this, but This love, like wine, leaves me   soaked, spinning, dizzy I am just not used to this— I've never wanted anybody to feel so good in life But it is what I want for you I feel so free, You are too — You know the moon is free falling too
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Nov 26, 2024
Nov 26, 2024 at 1:39 PM UTC
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It begins With fiery jokes about Canada   And your hair, blazing, untamed Is it maybe your stunning mind I am simmering, 180 degrees Perhaps it is the cookies we bake,   The stories we share, the laughter we shape With such SERIOUS faces I could look at you for hours. Your beauty defies all words But it's not even that — Your charm and confidence  — you wear them like a crown —I know it must hurt It could be your ambition That I truly love so much This burning sensation is so strange I know you won't like this, but This love, like wine, leaves me   soaked, spinning, dizzy I am just not used to this— I've never wanted anybody to feel so good in life But it is what I want for you I feel so free, You are too — You know the moon is free falling too
edoardo-alaimo
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Nov 26, 2024
Nov 26, 2024 at 1:39 PM UTC
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