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This is your reality, the brave new world; i just hang out here: birthed in the Cradle of Elam, a mourning son of Baal, smeared and anointed with the oil from the ***** fingerprints of countless scores of sweaty neophytes; carried, dropped, dented; brought forth from eons passed, updated for the 21st century, gilded Krylon-gold. This nebulous gift, made tangible and whole by blood, a form fitting sacrifice, transmogrified kudzu, rootless, digging talons' clutch into our minds' construct, seeks strength of conviction, action. Our ship is now veering off course. i must respond in kind. i will not be led astray. i will not have my good intentions commandeered. i will hijack your purpose, screaming mutiny, holding Occam's Razor-knife to the throat of your jihads. i issue a fatwa of peace, as you once did, before. i renounce a kingdom of hate, as you once did, before. i seek charity in effort, as we once did, before. Let us rebuild. Let us move forward. ***** a new Babel, forsaking the sword. Let our forks be on roads, and not on our tongues; a forging of union, as we'd once begun: My sisters, my brothers, my family, as one.
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Oct 20, 2013
Oct 20, 2013 at 7:39 PM UTC
a call to arms of brotherhood
This is your reality, the brave new world; i just hang out here: birthed in the Cradle of Elam, a mourning son of Baal, smeared and anointed with the oil from the ***** fingerprints of countless scores of sweaty neophytes; carried, dropped, dented; brought forth from eons passed, updated for the 21st century, gilded Krylon-gold. This nebulous gift, made tangible and whole by blood, a form fitting sacrifice, transmogrified kudzu, rootless, digging talons' clutch into our minds' construct, seeks strength of conviction, action. Our ship is now veering off course. i must respond in kind. i will not be led astray. i will not have my good intentions commandeered. i will hijack your purpose, screaming mutiny, holding Occam's Razor-knife to the throat of your jihads. i issue a fatwa of peace, as you once did, before. i renounce a kingdom of hate, as you once did, before. i seek charity in effort, as we once did, before. Let us rebuild. Let us move forward. ***** a new Babel, forsaking the sword. Let our forks be on roads, and not on our tongues; a forging of union, as we'd once begun: My sisters, my brothers, my family, as one.
originally, i repeated "my family" in German, Russian, Chinese, Arabic, Afrikaans, Hindi, and Spanish (in that order, for no special reason) between the last two lines....[sorry, i found a super cool translator program online]....turns out i couldn't include it all here because of the character display restrictions....i could probably figure it out, but that seemed like pretentious overkill, and i am too lazy for all that....
derek-yohn
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Oct 20, 2013
Oct 20, 2013 at 7:39 PM UTC
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