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I met the criteria, but i'm worried about my mind feeling that i'm adequate. I ask, Am I adequate? He responds, with a resonating harsh bitter 'No'. At that moment, with pain, came the realization that no matter what i did, my mind wouldn't see me as adequate. Alas, he couldn't be pacified, and I never realized that I was actually adequate until it was too late. (d.b.)
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Oct 20, 2013
Oct 20, 2013 at 11:09 AM UTC
am i adequate?
I met the criteria, but i'm worried about my mind feeling that i'm adequate. I ask, Am I adequate? He responds, with a resonating harsh bitter 'No'. At that moment, with pain, came the realization that no matter what i did, my mind wouldn't see me as adequate. Alas, he couldn't be pacified, and I never realized that I was actually adequate until it was too late. (d.b.)
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Oct 20, 2013 at 11:09 AM UTC
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