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she shuffled aboard on the tail of rush-hour, at bowling green, brooklyn-bound, 70 unwashed scents in tow, and a purple bergdorf-goodman shopping bag stuffed with stains and soiled rags, a crumpled ny post and a white plastic bag, the focus of her bare hands as she sat down; hands wrinkled and worn but tough like a boxer's; silver strands of knotted hair, fell over her face etched in age and acrimony, as she  rummaged through the bag; right eye closed, feigning sleep, I peaked over the aisle through the left; she untied the white plastic bag unveiling dinner in a styrofoam take-out container: rice, beans and chunks of meat smothered in red gravy; a 5-dollar special no doubt, stuffed into her mouth with  a black plastic spoon; slurp....slurp....slurp burp....lick..burp she looked up, flaunting a toothless smile of extreme delight "SAY YOU LOVE ME! SAY YOU LOVE ME!" she screamed to no one, and everyone... then barged through the door at franklin, scents, stains, rags et al, tossing spoon and styrofoam onto the floor... but for a few shaking heads and wry smiles, most were unmoved, and glued to digital magnets; she was just another nut-of-the-day on the ny subway... ~ Pablo (#fcbb) 10/21/2013
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Oct 20, 2013
Oct 20, 2013 at 8:38 AM UTC
fruit-cake brooklyn-bound
she shuffled aboard on the tail of rush-hour, at bowling green, brooklyn-bound, 70 unwashed scents in tow, and a purple bergdorf-goodman shopping bag stuffed with stains and soiled rags, a crumpled ny post and a white plastic bag, the focus of her bare hands as she sat down; hands wrinkled and worn but tough like a boxer's; silver strands of knotted hair, fell over her face etched in age and acrimony, as she  rummaged through the bag; right eye closed, feigning sleep, I peaked over the aisle through the left; she untied the white plastic bag unveiling dinner in a styrofoam take-out container: rice, beans and chunks of meat smothered in red gravy; a 5-dollar special no doubt, stuffed into her mouth with  a black plastic spoon; slurp....slurp....slurp burp....lick..burp she looked up, flaunting a toothless smile of extreme delight "SAY YOU LOVE ME! SAY YOU LOVE ME!" she screamed to no one, and everyone... then barged through the door at franklin, scents, stains, rags et al, tossing spoon and styrofoam onto the floor... but for a few shaking heads and wry smiles, most were unmoved, and glued to digital magnets; she was just another nut-of-the-day on the ny subway... ~ Pablo (#fcbb) 10/21/2013
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Oct 20, 2013
Oct 20, 2013 at 8:38 AM UTC
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