The hurricane you left inside my heart
is crashing down all memories apart.
It's inevitable, now, killing me within,
when once reality faded like a dream.
*Unfinished poem. I going to finish this soon. So what do you think
of this verse? Any comments, feedback or recommendations?
Pleeeeaaaase. Thank you.*
Oct 18, 2013
Oct 18, 2013 at 8:58 PM UTC
The hurricane you left inside my heart
is crashing down all memories apart.
It's inevitable, now, killing me within,
when once reality faded like a dream.
*Unfinished poem. I going to finish this soon. So what do you think
of this verse? Any comments, feedback or recommendations?
Pleeeeaaaase. Thank you.*
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