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what makes a man lose the will to live, vacant thoughts batter around his aching skull, his drives gone and dying to a stopping shudder, so much pain endured the last crawl is his final edit, he casts off his worries when he sees the exit, walk a mile or two in his shoes if you've the stomach to dare, his heart has deflated and his mind desecrated, he feels it would be best if he wasn't here,
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Oct 15, 2024
Oct 15, 2024 at 5:27 PM UTC
deflation of man
what makes a man lose the will to live, vacant thoughts batter around his aching skull, his drives gone and dying to a stopping shudder, so much pain endured the last crawl is his final edit, he casts off his worries when he sees the exit, walk a mile or two in his shoes if you've the stomach to dare, his heart has deflated and his mind desecrated, he feels it would be best if he wasn't here,
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Oct 15, 2024
Oct 15, 2024 at 5:27 PM UTC
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