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Have you ever read, seen, listened to something, something amazingly inspiring. Something moving and touching, so true and timeless... that it depressed you. Like glimpsing at God and knowing your greatness but fear grips you like a disease because knowing you're better is not enough. When truth dawns on you, your lies are lifted, your image pierced you see yourself in all your magnificence. Magnificently doubting yourself, as if it were possible that you were anything else than power. Than energy. Than love. Than destiny. So you sit and feel bad, suffering from perceived suffering. I sit with you, not as your coach your friend or an unexpected prophet but as someone sitting on the same boat.
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Oct 17, 2013
Oct 17, 2013 at 10:44 AM UTC
Daunting discoveries.
Have you ever read, seen, listened to something, something amazingly inspiring. Something moving and touching, so true and timeless... that it depressed you. Like glimpsing at God and knowing your greatness but fear grips you like a disease because knowing you're better is not enough. When truth dawns on you, your lies are lifted, your image pierced you see yourself in all your magnificence. Magnificently doubting yourself, as if it were possible that you were anything else than power. Than energy. Than love. Than destiny. So you sit and feel bad, suffering from perceived suffering. I sit with you, not as your coach your friend or an unexpected prophet but as someone sitting on the same boat.
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Rwandan
Oct 17, 2013
Oct 17, 2013 at 10:44 AM UTC
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