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The day greeted me with a sharp vision, Piercing me from in between, The mingled branches by my window, With aim, so markedly keen. And it beckoned me to that window, To behold the drops of dew, Like diamonds, sparkling everywhere, No matter what the view. And at once I wanted a wider scope, And ventured out the door. And I saw my familiar surroundings, In a way I not had before. My breath must have escaped me, And yet I was just unaware, Til my lungs filled again so fully; quickly And I was renewed right there. I soaked in all of the elegance, Until the moment had passed. Taking mental snapshots, aware Such beauty would not last.
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Jul 30, 2010
Jul 30, 2010 at 4:35 AM UTC
A Short Visit
The day greeted me with a sharp vision, Piercing me from in between, The mingled branches by my window, With aim, so markedly keen. And it beckoned me to that window, To behold the drops of dew, Like diamonds, sparkling everywhere, No matter what the view. And at once I wanted a wider scope, And ventured out the door. And I saw my familiar surroundings, In a way I not had before. My breath must have escaped me, And yet I was just unaware, Til my lungs filled again so fully; quickly And I was renewed right there. I soaked in all of the elegance, Until the moment had passed. Taking mental snapshots, aware Such beauty would not last.
deanena-tierney
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47/F/American
Jul 30, 2010
Jul 30, 2010 at 4:35 AM UTC
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