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typo of the first degree meant to type passed, better to letter the error, write the poem you knew was the one of the litter inside, stewing & brewing in the internal of you, regardless of the woulda shoulda coulda of poetic eye~hand~brain trinity of discombobulation… we passed a 110% good-god- another-glorious-day—perfect in every aspect of deep respect, lazing in sun and shade, no matter, for the cool customer of gentling breeze comforts the global populace and each draws comfort, deposits solace, from the timeless day that slowly slips inside us, a blessing for the senses, that are inadequate to praise it properly, ‘cept with a nod of appreciation for the great blessing that on us has been bestowed… we read, I write, bring her a coffee unasked, for the chip secreted by me in her temporal lobes, lobs me a silent alarm: snacks required! we heartily dinner debate, turkey burgers or mushrooms better?   Bun, No Bun? Salad ingredients  consumes a de minimus 5 minutes before the holy silence of our total environment, soothes the phony discordiality of our pretense, that there are two sides here, not just hers, no matter what🙄 any diplomatic observer might think… the bunnies sense our presence, emerging from the cool dark of the shaded burrows dug beneath our redwood deck, & get fed baby carrots, that they pretend not to see until the babies are summoned, from beneath the ledge!!! the deck, that is now in its forty fifth year, grows ancient stronger with a good annual, steam blasting face lift, bettering with age, keeping pace with the creatures resting on it, just above the bunnies below’s steerage deck, though the humans graceful age with no artifices or outside help, except the air, its salty flavoring, and the panoramic view’s total encompassed comforting… so the day passes, and it’s added to our cull of perfection, distinctly better than the day prior but who can be sure, not I, for the poems come easy, the music delivers delight, the books read, additive to the engine of the human body of know-more-ledge, weighty matters, but zero caloric, and thus, well deserved and served for dinner’s chatter banter + desert with caramel M&M’s (1) and the poet signals that the poem near complete, and the trad sign off, today unnecessary, no need to query, Where is Shelter? for we are all a day wiser, and smile, the answer before and inside us, and the only open question remaining, can heaven be better, and we secret wink, cause the answer is. too obvious to we restees, here, here is heaven, and go back to giving thanks for our lucky stars…
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Aug 13, 2024
Aug 13, 2024 at 3:28 PM UTC
The Past Day (passed)
typo of the first degree meant to type passed, better to letter the error, write the poem you knew was the one of the litter inside, stewing & brewing in the internal of you, regardless of the woulda shoulda coulda of poetic eye~hand~brain trinity of discombobulation… we passed a 110% good-god- another-glorious-day—perfect in every aspect of deep respect, lazing in sun and shade, no matter, for the cool customer of gentling breeze comforts the global populace and each draws comfort, deposits solace, from the timeless day that slowly slips inside us, a blessing for the senses, that are inadequate to praise it properly, ‘cept with a nod of appreciation for the great blessing that on us has been bestowed… we read, I write, bring her a coffee unasked, for the chip secreted by me in her temporal lobes, lobs me a silent alarm: snacks required! we heartily dinner debate, turkey burgers or mushrooms better?   Bun, No Bun? Salad ingredients  consumes a de minimus 5 minutes before the holy silence of our total environment, soothes the phony discordiality of our pretense, that there are two sides here, not just hers, no matter what🙄 any diplomatic observer might think… the bunnies sense our presence, emerging from the cool dark of the shaded burrows dug beneath our redwood deck, & get fed baby carrots, that they pretend not to see until the babies are summoned, from beneath the ledge!!! the deck, that is now in its forty fifth year, grows ancient stronger with a good annual, steam blasting face lift, bettering with age, keeping pace with the creatures resting on it, just above the bunnies below’s steerage deck, though the humans graceful age with no artifices or outside help, except the air, its salty flavoring, and the panoramic view’s total encompassed comforting… so the day passes, and it’s added to our cull of perfection, distinctly better than the day prior but who can be sure, not I, for the poems come easy, the music delivers delight, the books read, additive to the engine of the human body of know-more-ledge, weighty matters, but zero caloric, and thus, well deserved and served for dinner’s chatter banter + desert with caramel M&M’s (1) and the poet signals that the poem near complete, and the trad sign off, today unnecessary, no need to query, Where is Shelter? for we are all a day wiser, and smile, the answer before and inside us, and the only open question remaining, can heaven be better, and we secret wink, cause the answer is. too obvious to we restees, here, here is heaven, and go back to giving thanks for our lucky stars…
3:12pm Tue Augustus 13 two thousand and twenty four (1) or Tootsie Roll Lollipops, alternatively…
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Aug 13, 2024
Aug 13, 2024 at 3:28 PM UTC
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