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The new firehouse  stands where the old Hardshell church used to be stationed, and across the road new houses have replaced the once fallow field where the Methodist tent meeting took place when I was twelve years old, accountable for my wanton gaze, at the cheeks exposed by shorts that would not have been allowed on Sunday morning this Friday night, if you took the freewill doctrine unpopular now in circles philosophical,  canted like the hooks we used to turn sawlogs on the carriage where I offbeared in the summer and after school, saving cash I would one day use to court those long-legged ladies.
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Jul 25, 2024
Jul 25, 2024 at 11:43 AM UTC
Tent Meeting
The new firehouse  stands where the old Hardshell church used to be stationed, and across the road new houses have replaced the once fallow field where the Methodist tent meeting took place when I was twelve years old, accountable for my wanton gaze, at the cheeks exposed by shorts that would not have been allowed on Sunday morning this Friday night, if you took the freewill doctrine unpopular now in circles philosophical,  canted like the hooks we used to turn sawlogs on the carriage where I offbeared in the summer and after school, saving cash I would one day use to court those long-legged ladies.
bobby-copeland
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65/M/Kentucky
Jul 25, 2024
Jul 25, 2024 at 11:43 AM UTC
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