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He got up when everyone was sitting down, From a hot country to a cold one. The coldness blocked off his pain to return again. His dad’s friends were echoing, what a lesson. I should have been paying much closer attention. I just felt his pain at a closer dimension, What else was said that he didn’t mention?
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Jun 13, 2024
Jun 13, 2024 at 2:17 AM UTC
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He got up when everyone was sitting down, From a hot country to a cold one. The coldness blocked off his pain to return again. His dad’s friends were echoing, what a lesson. I should have been paying much closer attention. I just felt his pain at a closer dimension, What else was said that he didn’t mention?
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Jun 13, 2024
Jun 13, 2024 at 2:17 AM UTC
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