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The fleeting moment when Dusk conflates with the rising dawn And all that was ever loud Falls, to a million tiny pieces, at the feet of morning. Her still quiet Tears apart the knick-knack thoughts That you had displayed Like a dreamscape reflection, Spread like ashes on the windowsill. The wind breathes soft On the back of your neck and behind your ears Ghost kisses under the blanket of day.
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Oct 11, 2013
Oct 11, 2013 at 4:08 PM UTC
Falling Asleep by the Open Window
The fleeting moment when Dusk conflates with the rising dawn And all that was ever loud Falls, to a million tiny pieces, at the feet of morning. Her still quiet Tears apart the knick-knack thoughts That you had displayed Like a dreamscape reflection, Spread like ashes on the windowsill. The wind breathes soft On the back of your neck and behind your ears Ghost kisses under the blanket of day.
Re-wrote this and am now much happier with it. ANY THOUGHTS PLEASE WOULD BE MUCH APPRECIATED!! XOXO
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Oct 11, 2013
Oct 11, 2013 at 4:08 PM UTC
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