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Adding minutes to a lifetime (saying magic words) **”And you, dear poet, friend of many years, have given me so many inspirations, birthed within us words,so oft, and so well, that your pithy observations, manufacture time, add minutes to lifetimes**” <> wrote these words without thinking, they’re sweet and neat, trivial but incomplete but upon rear mirror review, Mr Poet re-thinks, perhaps deserved of another serving, curvy white, soft-to-the-lips, a moist vanilla kiss, excellent ice cream in a sugar cone, words irresistible for the sweetest poem sparks multi-coloration-explosion of sprinkles ‘pon  a skin’s surface, uprisings of what lurks in the centrum of your embodied universe and disembodied soul, shockingly uprising from an internal fulcrum, sea~tossed flotsam of a jagged life, now, all recovered words sprinkling, beach treasures, and yet, adding minutes to a lifetime… *reliving old reels, is time recaptured, creating a certain robust additive to thine cranking and cranky engine, that’s logged much more than a picayune hundred thousand miles on a voyage of e i g h t decades, you employ ten fingers to calculate your fugue of multi-voiced numerations!* *can it be? it cannot be! millions upon millions of minutes, possess and passed, yet highlight feature films, enabling reliving so real that by watching, seeing, believing, re-reading it is as if one is earning life extensions…*adding minutes to a lifetime… *‘tis true, rereading every small scrip, every poem, returns one to prior-places, each a datum, a particular spot, a point upon a schema of integrity & integration, that rule the visions, a message of individualism in the largest context of a true vision(arie)* “chacun un point dans une peinture pointilliste…” “each a point within a pointillistic painting…” *in a few years, a stumbling upon shall here return me here, and I will smile with great gratitude for the life extended, accepting with gratitude,* these few seconds, a last lasting chance, to say some magic words with a great vanilla whispering adding minutes to you life as well nml
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May 7, 2024
May 7, 2024 at 3:56 PM UTC
Adding minutes to a lifetime (saying magic words)
Adding minutes to a lifetime (saying magic words) **”And you, dear poet, friend of many years, have given me so many inspirations, birthed within us words,so oft, and so well, that your pithy observations, manufacture time, add minutes to lifetimes**” <> wrote these words without thinking, they’re sweet and neat, trivial but incomplete but upon rear mirror review, Mr Poet re-thinks, perhaps deserved of another serving, curvy white, soft-to-the-lips, a moist vanilla kiss, excellent ice cream in a sugar cone, words irresistible for the sweetest poem sparks multi-coloration-explosion of sprinkles ‘pon  a skin’s surface, uprisings of what lurks in the centrum of your embodied universe and disembodied soul, shockingly uprising from an internal fulcrum, sea~tossed flotsam of a jagged life, now, all recovered words sprinkling, beach treasures, and yet, adding minutes to a lifetime… *reliving old reels, is time recaptured, creating a certain robust additive to thine cranking and cranky engine, that’s logged much more than a picayune hundred thousand miles on a voyage of e i g h t decades, you employ ten fingers to calculate your fugue of multi-voiced numerations!* *can it be? it cannot be! millions upon millions of minutes, possess and passed, yet highlight feature films, enabling reliving so real that by watching, seeing, believing, re-reading it is as if one is earning life extensions…*adding minutes to a lifetime… *‘tis true, rereading every small scrip, every poem, returns one to prior-places, each a datum, a particular spot, a point upon a schema of integrity & integration, that rule the visions, a message of individualism in the largest context of a true vision(arie)* “chacun un point dans une peinture pointilliste…” “each a point within a pointillistic painting…” *in a few years, a stumbling upon shall here return me here, and I will smile with great gratitude for the life extended, accepting with gratitude,* these few seconds, a last lasting chance, to say some magic words with a great vanilla whispering adding minutes to you life as well nml
may 5~6 2024
nat-lipstadt
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
May 7, 2024
May 7, 2024 at 3:56 PM UTC
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